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I just want to see the sunrise once with you, and I’ll be happy
I want to watch it flit over the horizon
Lighting up the world
Over the mountains, or the sea
Or a city somewhere
I don’t care if I’m with you
I’ll lay in your arms and whisper
“How pretty”
And the world could slip away , I wouldn’t care
I’d die right there
In your arms that morning
And I wouldn’t cry a tear
Cause I had had that moment
The one moment I had wished for
And I had spent it,
With you
- by moonprincess70 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/30/2009 |
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- Title: Just once
- Artist: moonprincess70
- Description: A poem dedicated to a special someone kinda emo but id love your imput on it!
- Date: 07/30/2009
- Tags: just once
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Crestfallen Cosmo - 11/13/2010
- This is a good poem! It made me think of my special someone too. :3
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- ProfessorKC - 08/26/2009
- It'd make a good greeting card. This could be so much more than just someone saying they love. Why the sunrise? Why not sunset? You focus on the being with someone and leave a bunch of questions as to why. It's a little cliche as well with the "die in your arms" piece. You can say old sayings like this in a new way and still mean the same thing, but keep the words in your piece from getting "dusty" ... sorry but ... no.
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- XxilovethemusicxX - 08/05/2009
- thats beautiful i feel like crying right now good job keep it going :,(
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- halo_star29 - 07/30/2009
- that was beautiful it made me feel warm inside did you picture a beach when writing it because thats how it made me feel like im at a beach at sunset. I hope you two stay together wink
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- kessia_baby - 07/30/2009
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i think that was beautiful. dont ever let anyone tell you otherwise.
and i mean that in a no homo kind of way ok. - Report As Spam