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Standing in the rain,
Twirling, faces towards the skies,
Dancing through the droplets,
Memories past flash by
Through times new and old
Of happiness, depression, and all else
Like the pages of a book, they unfold
As a screenplay, the images role
The numerous connotations swish by
In a few blinks of the eye
It is sprinkling,
Miniscule water molecules
Floating down,
Fluttering through the air,
And the thoughts begin
Looking up towards the sky
At the clouds forming,
To the heavens,
Towards the formation
Of the beginning
The unseen waters condense
Growing and building
As we have throughout our lives
We think of the childhood times
Of hiding beneath our covers
As the loud thunder booms
And the lightning frightening flashes
Across the stormy sky
Of the warmth and comfort
In the caring embrace of mom’s hugs
Of the laughter rippling
As we jump in the puddles
Left behind from the downpour
The silver lining from the terrifying storm
As the droplets rain down
Harder and faster
We think of our childhood passing
And aging and maturing
Becoming older and wiser
Yet, even the wisest of all
Still make mistakes
And can be hurt
Thinking of when we were wrong
And the pain that followed
The mishap or misjudgment
Yet the sweet reward that came
With our accomplishments
And the achievement,
Dulcet and making it all worth it
Taking that plunge,
Diving into the unknown,
And surfacing victorious
Tears begin to fall
From the pools collecting
Beneath our eyes
And join with the tears of the heavens
Splattering steadily
Upon the pools collecting
Underneath our feet
In a rhythm constant as a drum
That played the song of our lives
Of our beating heart
Remembering the painful times
Of broken relationships,
Lost jobs or money,
Or a failing grade,
Breaking of belief,
Loss of hope, trust, and
Worst of all, loved ones
Yet the bliss that weaved in and out
Along with the hurt and sorrow
Of kissing in the rain,
Laughter among friends and family,
Success in school, work, and life
Believing, hoping, trusting,
And most of all loving,
Holding in our hearts,
Each and every person,
Place, thing, or idea,
No matter the size or importance
That brought us happiness
And kept us going
Through the tougher times
Never forgetting
Those who lent a helping hand
When we fell tumbling down,
Or a shining light
When we got lost in the darkness,
Or spoke up, loud and clear,
When we have lost our voice
And stand by our sides always,
Seeing the pain in our eyes
Despite the false joy we plaster
Upon a counterfeit smile,
Fake laughter, and lying words
As the drizzling comes to a stop,
Tears are washed away by rainfall
Tearstains upon our faces unrecognizable
As nothing but streaks from the rain
And we start anew
Feeling not the tears we wept
But the rain that revived us
That continuous cycle
Which we could rely on
Throughout our cycle of life
Through the good and bad
The bittersweet rain,
Where the storms of life
Whirl with howling winds
And end with cleaner air,
Refreshing and new,
Ready to take on all
And a bright rainbow peeking out
With the coming sun
- by emeraldpuppy9 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/24/2009 |
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- Title: In the Rain
- Artist: emeraldpuppy9
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Description:
this one's a bit longer than my usual ones, but i like it (:
any comments, compliments, critiques... plz let me know (:
it wasnt that far back, but not SUPER recent either, but here it is ^^ - Date: 07/24/2009
- Tags: rain
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Comments (5 Comments)
- from my hands - 08/04/2009
- wonderful. smile
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- ParadoX_Revolution_XlV - 07/28/2009
- This is a really good poem! X] and captivating.
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- Phinagin2000 - 07/26/2009
- very good, i really like that i can get a perfect image from every line biggrin ! very descriptive, very true
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- tehrandumhobo - 07/24/2009
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wow. i agree with the other guy. long poem. but def. deserves 10 stars. hm. one thing though. childhood times hiding beneath the covers huh?
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- zhongwen_shitsumeishi - 07/24/2009
- *pant* wow this is a rlly long poem xD...took me several minutes just to finish reading everything....gahh too bad someone already rated this b4 i even had the chance to rate first >.<....o wellz....i'm still the first commentor xD.....five stars alll the way....and all u other commentors...u better give this five stars....and if there were a ten stars...i would rate it ten stars too.....wouldnt u agree?
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