Don't lie to me

• Artist: xXRawr-GirrXx
• Description: Just a song I wrote. It's supposed to be kinda aggressive and angry. Not the best ever but whatever. I'm new at it...
• Date: 07/23/2009
• Tags: dont

Strip it down
To the core
Tell me the truth
No hesitation [x4] [Get louder and and more aggressive each time. Last one screams]

[Quiet] I'm tired of the lies
you whisper in these ears
I'm tired of the pain
The reason for these tears

How could you do this?
You took my heart
And ripped it to bits
I don't need this s**t

I don't want to be
Just another b***h
you scored with
I'm not an object! [Scream]

You run your fingers
Through my hair
Telling me you love me
DON'T LIE TO ME! I DON'T CARE! [Scream]

Strip it down
To the core
Tell me the truth
No hesitation [x2] [Yell]

[Scream whats in ( ) ]
I don't want your lies (All your sin)
I want it all to end (I don't need it)
All your sin (I don't need your lies)
I don't need it (I want it all to end)

[Yell]Just leave me be!
I'm done crying
Aahh! Get out of my head (I don't need you!)
I don't love you (Don't Love you!)

Don't lie to me!
Don't come near me!
Don't speak to me!
I'm Done! (It's over b***h!)

Get away!
I'm done yellin'!
I'm tired of you
Just tell me the truth dmmit! (It's all I ask!)

[Stop yelling. Speak]If you ever loved me... [Intro in background]
You'd tell the truth...
This is all your fault...
GET AWAY!

[Intro continues and fades out song]

Comments

[xXfatelessXsoulXx]

ausome u should wright more and yes it had the proper ammount of anger

[xXRawr-GirrXx]

Thanx. I'll work on that

[Intrepid Indigo]

I agree, I liked it, sure it was angry but it was the kind of anger that is properly directed. I like the anger it gives the piece teeth. I also like that you indicated volume change as it adds an earnestness, I would suggest putting the singing in italics, yelling in normal print and going all caps for screaming, would leave the lyrics less cluttered and make for better presentation

[Gwink]

It's amazing! I like it. 5/5