Sad Storm

• Artist: Zompirelf
• Description: A poem I had to write for my English class.
• Date: 07/21/2009
• Tags: storm

Sadness is a storm raging in our hearts.
The hurtful words and strikes we receive are the thunder and lightning that destroys us.
The wind and rain are the tears and words that burst out between the cries and shouts.
The darkness and the clouds are the cover-ups and buckle-downs to not let anyone know we're really hurt.
I may look calm at some times, but it is always building up inside for the next down pour

Comments

[Blood Lust 325]

wow pretty good poem i think it has a good point because were that much closer to the next mishap that could make us pour

[Zompirelf]

If you are rating it worse because of the lines then thats stupid. Rate it on the point it gives.

[Flaming Tsunami]

The lines seem ridiculously long; try breaking them up. I like the extensive use of metaphors. I give you a three out of five, good job.

[Centurion Tonitrius]

very nice dark definatley read my poem "life?"

[RoseBud316]

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