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No man knows the green
of the fallen buds of Spring
Lost on crack’d blue
A storm that blew by
And daisies pal’d the squalor
of sol bleach’d Summers
and no force could stall
The freedom of hope’s windFall
And the tattoo of rain sang his cold gain
- Title: Arms of Stone
- Artist: FilipStiq
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Description:
Don't even ask what it's about.
It's a structure of my own creation ((<--to my knowledge)), a triple-haiku with a multiplied final line, with some of my quirky syntax style thrown in there. Haikus are three lines, the first 5 syllables, the second 7, third 5, and are almost always about nature or imagery. Just so ya know. - Date: 07/12/2009
- Tags: stone haiku undefined
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