Blood Raining Like Tears...

• Artist: AriaRose13
• Description: Just something off the top of my head...
• Date: 07/06/2009
• Tags: blood rain love heartbreak

Crimson drops falling like rain
Driving me insane
Tear streaks on my skin
Escape the fear again
As the sky rains blood
The pain feels good
But my heart is dying
For you I'm crying
Stop me from falling
Your name I am calling
Hold me tight
It feels so right
The tears keep coming
The blood's still running
I can't stop the grieving
From watching you leaving
I'm stuck all alone
Skin ripped from bone
Heart torn in two
By a dagger from you
Love broken like glass
You leave so fast
Please come back
I love you...

Comments

[Deathcake J]

The rhyming seems trivialized by the lack of meter. You might find a stronger voice if you either abandoned form or adopted a couplet-friendly meter.

[vv7722]

Truly amazing. I got passed the first couple of lines, then I just couldn't stop reading. So sad and touching. 5/5 for sure.