hiding

• Artist: bludzomby
• Description: i wrote this
• Date: 07/02/2009
• Tags: hiding

i hiding for the day i cant fing a place to stay im hiding from the light im hiding
from light

Comments

[NecroseKnight]

you need work.

[Greeneroo]

Wow. This is the worst poem I've ever read. You need to work on grammar, spelling, phrasing. Either that, or take some time before submitting another "poem." Definitely get a five-year-old to proofread your work before you submit another piece.