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I hate people.
I hate them all.
Ruiners of life,
and murderers of the soul.
Take my breath.
Take my blink.
But dont take my heart of warmth.
- by XxGraveofDreamsxX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/24/2009 |
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- Title: hate people....
- Artist: XxGraveofDreamsxX
- Description: wrote this when my math teacher took away my picture i waz drawing and told me to pay attention. i got mad, so i wrote this. :P and still didnt pay attention. i preferebly like it, so no negitive comments plz. n.n
- Date: 06/24/2009
- Tags: hate people
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Taste of a Raindrop - 06/29/2009
- Try adding some exclamation points to make the poem more powerful. Also, fix murders and change it to murderers. Just make sure that hatred isn't the guiding force in your life. ^_^ 4/5
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- Uncool Ghoul - 06/27/2009
- although it is short, it is well written.
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