Water

• Artist: Zanech
• Description: A short "free-verse" poem about the oriental element of water, and how it exists in the make-up of an individual person.
• Date: 06/18/2009
• Tags: water poem freeverse element

Like water I am, for near the water I feel at peace
Cold waves swell through my veins, quietly lapping at the shores of my heart
My soul at times a wall of water, at others a soothing rain
In water I find determination, perseverance, patience
Forever pushing, forever pulling, forever seeking balance

Comments

[inking the world]

wow it really captivates you

[scitama]

Nicely written, and the visuals are excellent smile

[xx-Cyril Prince]

its very good.. I like it..!