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Angels never lie... and saken is forsaken when angels fall... but when they fall for me.... all lost but for one virtue.... and with that one virtue is the boundry my heart is guarded... and with the love that is guarded ... my life is also... and i thank that guard every day of my life...
and today is another... like every other... that which my blessing shall not go unblessed.... so i now say it .. and ill let it roll off my tongue with meaning.. if ever haveing meaning...my soul loveing and relishing this.. a sinful delight... a delight but without sin.... amazeing how good this can feel... .....and the one i say this too... is the only one i will have ever held dear and true.... and to the one i love most.... i will now give my thanks to you...
let my heart break so it may make anew, staying close to you forever.. and always for you.
let my heart heal.. kissed wounds ... kissed by you..
let my love be cherished..
promise me.. you'll be mine?
promise .. me... no more worries, no crying ,i promise we'll be fine....
My angel.. fallen for me...loving no other as much.. careing about nothing else.. all that exist... all that is... steal my heart.. you did from the start.. stealing yours... not that hard... must be true.. destined for you.....
- Title: My angel..
- Artist: XDsilent
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Description:
I made this for my gf and she is really the reason i love poetry.
This is a romantic love poem. Nothing less, nothing more. If you like it please, feel free to comment if you didn't..well still comment godd*m i would like to know how i did >.< charzilla likes good praise tho :) I have a unique type of poetry.. i use both free and ryhme to mellow it out a little. no i dont separate the parts... i like to give it that last minute ment for thought type of poems. - Date: 06/18/2009
- Tags: romantic romance angel love
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Comments (1 Comments)
- BattleStarPicketFence - 06/18/2009
- It's alright. The play on "fallen angel" and "falling in love" is pretty awesome. smile But I'm pretty sick of fragments and ellipses by the end. I think a more organized structure would benefit your message.
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