When You Die.

• Artist: Lullaby Kitten
• Description: So, I wrote this for school and stuff. Can you please leave a comment I want to make it better. Thanks!
• Date: 06/14/2009
• Tags: death

We all see,
We all know,
We all saw what you did,
Now let us know,

If when you died,
That you'll came back for us,
What now do you want,
That is my only question For now Anyway

Comments

[Lullaby Kitten]

Its about death, and how there's going to be someone, waiting there, for you to do something about it. Like lets say someone was murdered, they would be-if you knew them-waiting there for you to make their killers pay. Or, like this one, the person killed the other one, and now, the dead want them to wait there, so they can get revenge. Its just mainly about death... biggrin

[Captain Christine-Daae]

What's it about?

[Bloodsoakedbutterfly]

you didn't putany of yourself in it as it seems next time write from your heart no matter how stupid it may sound it is what you thought think about submitting work to a magazine they often give real good advice or even publish it