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the angel forgives
the monster of lies and lust
so now there is peace
the fox is cunning
but the panda is gentle
and one is guilty
but one does forgive
and that one also forgets
and so there is peace
so now what is left
lies and lust, or love and life
love is the winner
what shall the end be
it shall be peaceful and good
and love shall triumph
- by xoxsiagoxox |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/04/2009 |
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- Title: haiku of the fox and the panda
- Artist: xoxsiagoxox
- Description: well, the haiku is non-ryhmeing poetry that paints a mental picture. mostly affiliated with describeing seasons. but i made this haiku about a fox and a panda. the haiku uses 5 sylables in the first line, 7 in the second line, and five in the last line. please feel free to comment on what i can do to make it better, even though it was a spurr of the moment thing.
- Date: 06/04/2009
- Tags: haiku panda
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Comments (2 Comments)
- The_lil_Stalker_Boy - 06/10/2009
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simply beautiful......
why so little ratings and comments? ill never know... - Report As Spam
- omg its willie15 - 06/07/2009
- wowowow thats a poem showing feeling and fun in it make many more
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