alone

• Artist: shy_penguin
• Description:
• Date: 06/04/2009
• Tags: alone

I walk the trails that fallow up the mountain,
listening to the soft echos,
watching the clouds..
seeing as they come and go,
in various shapes..
telling me a sign?
I dare not know......

Up on the mountain, I lay on a cliff,
feeling the cool breeze,
the echos louder in the air,
watching the clouds..
seeing as they come and go,
in various shapes..
telling me a sign?
still, I dare not know......

On the tops of the mountain, I sit on the flats,
welcomed by the warmth of the sunset,
the echos fade away along with the blue in the sky,
watching the clouds..
seeing them only go,
in various shapes..
telling me a sign?
A sign that I now know.....

(I'm all alone)

Comments

[AwakenedDevil546]

i think it has a good format.
you repeat your self to many times,
buts its stiil good, just needs some work,
smile