This love

• Artist: devilchild777
• Description: This is a sonnet I wrote just yesterday. It's a Shakespearean sonnet, and it's written in iambic pentameter. I had to write it for en english assignment, but I thought i'd post it on here to see what people think. :D
  
  
• Date: 05/23/2009
• Tags: love

There's nothing but this love I feel for you.
No sound except my breath, my pounding heart.
There's goosebumps on my skin, you've got them too.
I'm aching now, though we're not far apart.
Your lips on mine are more than I can bear.
My heart pounds and your arms, they hold me tight.
I wind my trembling fingers through your hair.
The moon shines brightly on this magic night.
Your eyes and hands, they wander lovingly.
I'm at a loss for words, I can't describe.
Desire and love are mingled perfectly.
The flawless way our bodies entertwine.
You'll love and carry me eternally,
Into unknown realms of ecstasy.

Comments

[devilchild777]

Thanks so much.
He certainly didn't think he was lucky, unless leaving me was a sign of his appreciation.
But thanks for the comment. =)

[Long~Lost~Dream]

Interesting ryhme scheme. Lucky sucker, whoever you wrote this about. lol I like this, keep writing!