If I were A Tree

• Artist: umberella678
• Description: this poem is about the tre and how they sway in the breeze and how they are free and they have their own power to sway within the breeze
• Date: 05/21/2009
• Tags: tree

If I were a tree how happy my life would be if I were a tree. If I were a tree I would be soo free that the birds and the bees would be jealous of me. Only if I were a tree how happy my life would be. The birds and the bees would be jealous of me because I was so free. Only if I were a tree.



Thanx for reading I hope u give me good comments about this and tell me if you don't like it in a nice way. Thanx lol biggrin 3nodding

Comments

[SilvertongueSagittarius]

the comment below me was better than your poem. 2/5

[AnimaRisi]

if you were a tree you would be cut up and made into paper,forever to be used and wasted . if you were a tree you would be broken down and turn into furniture,helpless to house fire's that befalls you . if you were a tree you would only be free as much as the world lets you be and what little breeze you get will probably poison you and you future offspring.............................this is me telling you i like your poem (i notice that your green hair , it match w/ the tree thing^^)