Decay of the heart

• Artist: SakuraIchigoRyu
• Description: well this is complicated... but also not. i'm having issues with a friend and he's being a jerk, I don't really feel this way about him, but I needed to write and this is what I got. I know it isn't very good, but feedback never hurts, so have fun.
• Date: 05/12/2009
• Tags: tough

That boy that I held dear,
He's gone and left me here.

Without a whisper or a word,
left me, never to be heard.

I've cried all by myself,
put my heart on a shelf.

I'll try to detach it,
that feeling that bit.

That feeling that stung,
my song that's unsung.

Let the hurt rot away,
and the let the world play.

So I may hate you alone in my silence.

Comments

[xXPucketteXx]

Its good...and if there's any one good thing about boys its that they inspire great poetry.♥ 4/5

[Yumi Dark Rose]

nice but not a nice ending! still 4/5