A Whisper of a Song

• Artist: Nemone
• Description: I think this was the first poem I ever wrote though I'm not sure exactly. It's been a long time since I wrote it and I've revised a few lines here and there over the years but it's basically unchanged since then.
• Date: 05/08/2009
• Tags: whisper song

I'm writing for a whisper
Of a song whose time has past
The image of an angel
Whose shadow's gone at last
I'm writing of the wind
That blew that song away
It will not bring it back
Despite how much I pray
I'm writing of the tears I cried
The anger and the rage
That such a person had to die
At such a youthful age
I'm writing that I'm calmer now
I know now that he's gone
I will not cry another tear
For my sweet and stolen song
But although I do not cry
Don't think my heart's run dry
Each day I cry a tear at heart
And will until I die

Comments

[Vanya Cellest]

this makes me want to cry, probably because i know who it was written for. Such a terrible tragedy. sad

[FuriazFTW]

All I've got to say is...

DAMN! 5/5

[Monsier Caderousse]

T^T Beautiful.

[Adria Claire]

this is beautiful! I think that it is very deep and heartfel. I LOVE it!

[Nemone]

Thanks, I wrote this for one of my best friends who died when I was younger. I wrote it just a couple of years after he died but I think it is still able to express how I feel even now.

[persinomm]

this poem is very deep...very depressing and never looking up to the future. (future's bleak? maybe...)

Anyhow, nicely done! I really enjoyed the stanzas! biggrin