Nothing

• Artist: snake-I-gator
• Description: its not emo its jsut what came to my mind...
• Date: 04/19/2009
• Tags: nothing poetry

You look over,
and see nothing
You look to the other side,
and see a world you've never seen,
something more then you would ever of known.
It is all destroyed
All ruined,
just ash and blackness
then you think...
i rather look at nothing

Comments

[snake-I-gator]

first if all its not a story its a poem
and poems have hidden messages so whatever.
just think more dont be lazy

[II Violent_tear II]

use more imagery.... what are you talking about when u look over, wat are you looking at, why are we listening and such... use all the key components of poetry, and your poem could improve greatly.