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Time flows past mine weary eyes
my soul grows still once more
these black, dark and dreary skies
seep shadows through my core
If the world shall never see
The light of life again
then I shall say, alas we
could not have stopped the end.
- Title: Dark Skies
- Artist: EndOsiris
- Description: This is the first poem I've ever written, I wrote it back when nothing seemed to be going right for me. I've been told it's good, but I thought I would submit it to the arena. I hope you like it.
- Date: 04/14/2009
- Tags: dark skies
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Comments (6 Comments)
- heyitsshelby - 03/26/2011
- I mean lesson.
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- heyitsshelby - 03/26/2011
- really good, it's a poem that teaches you a lesoon (: Good Job!!
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- XoFunkyoX - 06/12/2009
- i like it, its deep and touching in a way. Keep it up!
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- Shadow_Incarnation - 04/24/2009
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Pretty good!
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- XxwormyxX - 04/17/2009
- wow this is really good u should keep writing
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- Scruffy_dog02 - 04/16/2009
- Amazing~~~ I love the words you used in it smile <3
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