A Thousand Petals

• Artist: Kaira Angel
• Description: I wrote it to show how everything can change, depending on who you become or who you meet. ^^ i hope you like it! Please Rate and Comment!
• Date: 04/09/2009
• Tags: thousand petals

a thousand petals
over the ocean
falling, floating
raining, burning
all a part of me

a thousand petals
over the sand
speeding, slowing
sparkling, flowing
ignore the plee

a thousands petals
over the marsh
soaking, drying
accepting, denying
whats next

a thousand petals
over the mountains
freezing, falling,
loving, calling
its not on text

a thousand petals
over the lake
drifting, floating,
dripping, soaking
landing on air

a thousand petals
over the forest
loosing, wearing
breaking, tearing
with no care

a thousand petals
over the city
falling, flying
bruising, crying
it wont mend

a thousand petals
over the land
freezing, burning
flying, churning
its the end

Comments

[Kaira Angel]

^^ thank you!! haha thats kinda what my friends said at school.....heheh....x)

[M Shadows2221]

i like a lot of the poem, i do however don't like the last line... now idk what you wanted to do with the end but the current ending seems a little rocky but otherwise i liked it 4/5