Eternal Night

• Artist: Riot666
• Description: I really think that the world would be so much better like this.
• Date: 03/27/2009
• Tags: eternal night

Another night follows the day.
Like a child does its mother.
Still I lie awake.
Plagued by insomnia, I sit up on the roof top.
The night is peaceful.
The moon shines brightly as the sky glitters with stars.
The evening summer breeze cools my thoughts.
I stare upon the sky endlessly.
I do not want the sun to rise.
For the eternal night would please me.
For if the sky was to always be like this.
My thoughts would always be calm.

Comments

[Riot666]

it's not supposed to rhyme dumbass

[cooll666725]

Very good, but needs a better scheme for rhyming. I give it a 4/5. Read my poems sometime.
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[Mizuburo Inoue]

I can alost feel the light breeze and hear the cars go by under the stars. This is great-- keep it up.