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Sweet-scented incense
floods the room, permeating
even the floorboards.
This small flat fills with people,
eyes blurred. Some laugh too loudly, one
is deathly still.
I sit, left of center,
and watch our long-haired daughters
brush aside bouquets
of ivory chrysanthemums,
and kindly kiss your picture;
worn cloth brushing pine boards.
I catch myself thinking of you,
and despair.
White was your favorite color
and, darling, I’m wearing it for you now.
The ring on my left hand,
grows colder by the hour.
The sky weeps through a window,
tears falling from ashen clouds.
- by PromisedSword |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/25/2009 |
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- Title: A Darker Shade of White
- Artist: PromisedSword
- Description: A poem I wrote for my college's creative writing class last semester. It shouldn't be hard to figure out what it's about. ;D
- Date: 03/25/2009
- Tags: death love tragedy romance
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Comments (3 Comments)
- abcdeyui - 03/29/2009
- To me, this poem is among one of the better free verse poems people have submitted. It's very tragic, and sends you into a blur of emotions. You could have organized it a tad better though. 4/5
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- Zeb Thunder - 03/26/2009
- Deep, chika! Nice! I like the free verse. It gives it a bit more depth.
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- Alkestic - 03/25/2009
- the tragedy is is goot but not excellent the love is cool death not very good but after all is good just organize a lil more 4/5
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