Unfaithful

• Artist: Cat_Meowitzer
• Description: This poem is for those who have ever experienced the pain of having someone they thought loved them sneak around behind their back.
• Date: 03/22/2009
• Tags: unfaithful paindepressed loveheartbroken

I was struck in the heart...
There was no where to run...
You were with someone else...
The pain had just begun....
I stopped getting sleep...
I'd just cry through the night...
During the day I'd pretend...
everything was alright...
But I'd hurt all the time...
and my heart felt like led...
I hated feeling that way...
I'd rather have been dead...
But what would the point be...
because dead's how I felt...
The blood from the cuts...
let me know I was real....
I was tired of the pain.....
I'd dealt with enough strife...
I didn't think I'd get through it...
Atleast not with my life....
So I kept telling myself...
That you're not worth my tears...
and day by day...
my mind slowly cleared...
And at last I realized...
since you tore me apart...
a person like you...
never deserved my heart.

Comments

[maydaymouse]

That is a very good poem, and I like that I can relate to it. 5/5

[Sunafire]

Yeah I can relate to it.
At first I was like 'Woah! Emo poem' but then I read that last little bit and it changed my opinion entirely smile
So well done biggrin

[Cat_Meowitzer]

I have another poem called Endless Sensation submitted, and thank you so much for your compliments.

[QUEEN_ OF_EVRIITHIN]

wit dis poem i liked how u made a bad situation into a good lesson. it relly gives a strong lesson to yougn ppl tht r 2 nieve to realize it. so i think u did a great job wit this n ill belookin foreword to ur next poem

[QUEEN_ OF_EVRIITHIN]

oh mi fukkin gawd. dis poem iz relly relly relly awsome like fer realz. u r very talented n im sure alot of ppl can relate to dis poem.