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Is love supposed to make you feel this way?
One moment you’re absolutely giddy.
Butterflies fluttering in your stomach.
Your heart racing in your chest.
Your cheeks growing warm.
A goofy smile spreading across your lips.
Then another moment you’re absolutely depressed.
Tears dripping down your cheek.
Doubt filling your mind.
A constant longing that pains the soul.
A drug, an obsession, a disease
Makes normal, intelligent people turn into
Emotional, obsessed fools
Is this how love is supposed to be?
- by XxDancing_All_AlonexX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/20/2009 |
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- Title: Is Love Supposed To......?
- Artist: XxDancing_All_AlonexX
- Description: My first real entry and a while since I actually wrote poetry. I was inspired by my first real relationship when writing this. Please comment with constructive critism. I would really love to learn new ways to improve my writing. Thank you! <3
- Date: 03/20/2009
- Tags: love supposed
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- I Am LiViNg___NiGhTmArE - 04/25/2009
- This is good! 4/5
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- dares2dream - 03/21/2009
- that's really good, i can totally relate 3nodding keep on writing!
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- tink1347 - 03/21/2009
- i really like your poem, it is amazing
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