Just a Dream

• Artist: everheart_rose
• Description: Just a dream
  Deep inside
  I'm dying to cry
  so terrified
  of this mess
  i think to myself
  what have i done
  im always eyed
  but why
  i ask myself
  is because of my attitude
  is it because of my looks
  or is it because of someone i hang out with.....
  but then i finally realize
  my self image is something im gonna have to accept
  i know what i've done is wrong
  but it won't get the rest of me
  going to live my life like there's no tomorrow
  i realize now
  that it's just a dream
• Date: 03/18/2009
• Tags: justadream

plz rate this 5/5......i work so hard smile

Comments

[wmiinkdeys]

good job. I got lost in certain areas. It starts sad, then questioning the self, to who you hang out with, then to something you did wrong??? It bounces in too many directions. Think of one end, and work from there. Good attempt, but i am confused at where you want to go with this.

[WinterSpringSummerFall]

What did you do wrong? But besides that it was totally awesome! Four stars!

[Fearless Fly]

What did you do that was wrong?