its wateve u think

• Artist: motherdear
• Description: comment me with titles for this poem i wanna c wat the ppl think
• Date: 03/18/2009
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speak up speak out dont worry bout your flaws my life is mine no one elses so whats it to ya im submiting this not because of boredom nor was i born dumb wait that makes no sense to bad stop reading for those who comment so harsh leave me be have mercy for u dont know me at all


call it wat u want this entry will have no name unless it is required i forsake u not having a clue wat forsaken means love me just because even if i dont say please

lately ive wondered wats my purpose n life n every1 in my life said its to make others laugh but false hope n false happy how the heck is that funny

this whole entry is random n if uve got to this part then im doin sumthin rite okay gudnite not gudbye u never kno i may see u n life


--love hurts but apperently i like the pain-- (ouch)

Comments

[Dorian Raker]

I think it should be called "In Need of Spell-check."

I can forgive the lack of capitalization for the sake of ee cummings. But the chat-speak just grates my nerves.

Not my cup of tea, but a good effort.

Keep writing.