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• Artist: ShadowTrevi
• Description: something i did when i was sad... this is how i feel... well kinda please comment me to tell me if it is okay? please and thank u....
  date: 10:58am 3/09/09
• Date: 03/09/2009
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each day, each night,
the shadows beckon within the darkness

nomatter what i do....
my heart is still broken....

every day, every night,
my heart is healed
my heart is healed as it is the work of an angel

i want to see my angel happy
but i end up bringing misery....

manytimes i want to die...
manytimes i want to live...

my saddness takes over
as i make the ones around me sad....

many disagree with what i see...
but as well as i know darkness...
i might as well die....

in my point of view
i am pathetic...
i am useless...
i am nothing...

but in others i am something

as i hurt myself,
i hurt my angel

what do i see?
the misery i bring...

many say we all have a reason to live
as each dawns ray of light destroys the one i seek for revenge,
i might as well die...

but yet i live
my angel makes me happy
my angel makes my days in whole
my angel the one i live for

my angel the one i love

Comments

[Daddy Got This Account]

nice job, i like the flow of it. but i would suggust going back and editing the spelling for example, two lines up from the end, it says "may" instead of "my" but over all, i really enjoyed reading this poem. 5/5