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On the wind,
I see colors.
The colors of,
So many wandering souls.
They go by,
Lost forever by time.
The colors,
Why can no one see?
Can they,
Or is it only me?
The souls all have,
A different scene.
But the meaning,
I can glean.
With the colors,
Floating as the wanderers act.
Their actions all,
Take on a colored pact.
Angry ones so flustered,
From the wrong side of the bed.
I can see one main color,
That color's name be Red.
Lost souls crying,
Sobbing from Depression's bite.
Taking their sadness in my eyes,
All that comes is a soft Blue light.
Then as i sit there,
I see a Scared, lost little fellow.
But for his soul,
All i can see is Yellow.
I see those together,
Two souls joined by Love.
As joyous as can be,
Their souls each as White as doves.
The one standing behind a tree,
Staring in bitter Jealousy.
I feel bad for their soul,
For it glows a sickly Green.
For those trouble with naught,
I behold the spirits of those truely Happy.
Smiling, Singing,
Cheeks flushed Pink as they run free.
As it is,
Seeing their troubled emotions,
All the colors meld.
After my split-second peek,
I realize that the final color,
The color of all souls,
Is Black.
- by Dolphina_Cerulean |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/03/2009 |
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- Title: ~Colors of a Soul~
- Artist: Dolphina_Cerulean
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Description:
A poem I created in English IV class on 3/3/09.
I was having what i call an 'Emo moment'.
It went away once i wrote this.
I allow comments because i want to be a better writer, but i do not want 'haters' clogging it for gold.
Please, i hope you enjoy this. - Date: 03/03/2009
- Tags: colors soul emotions
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Dolphina_Cerulean - 03/06/2009
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Thank you for criticism. I know this peice doesn't have the best flow...i'm not a great poet. I just sat there in English class writing this because we had a topic to write in our 'journals' about and i felt bad right then. Viola'.
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- ll Tears of Joy ll - 03/04/2009
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This is good
But some parts dont flow
3/5 - Report As Spam
- narutone15 - 03/04/2009
- really good 4/5
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- Yuki Hero - 03/03/2009
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Oh Dolphina!!!!
This is very beautiful, a real work of art!
I gave you a 4/5
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