-
She said it sucked,
That it wasn't important
That sensitive guys are tacky
What she didn't know
Is that she hurt him
He felt like his heart was on fire.
I tried to comfort him,
Tell him that it's cool,
That it's a good way
To vent out feelings
What he doesn't know,
Is that this will stick with him forever,
Whenever he sees her,
He'll think of what she said
- by paradise pier |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/09/2009 |
- Skip
- Title: The Truth Hurts
- Artist: paradise pier
- Description: This is all true. My friend was feeling bad and sent me what the girl said. Then this happened. So yeah. Title doesn't really have anything to do with it. I couldn't think of one.
- Date: 02/09/2009
- Tags: truth hurts
- Report Post
Comments (5 Comments)
- rock_luver24 - 05/29/2010
- amazing. please read mine. its called "The Hurt"
- Report As Spam
- Kinasui - 05/12/2009
- Yeah i really somehow know how it feels... and this poem expresses it quite good... :X
- Report As Spam
- peramene - 02/13/2009
- The title is the single most important phrase in a piece. Your piece very nicely captures the mood of the event - though not the particular situation - but a title would greatly improve the focus! Keep writing!
- Report As Spam
- iammidlover - 02/10/2009
- scary good...
- Report As Spam
- Miss Vulpix the Second - 02/10/2009
- wow that is really good....
- Report As Spam
- |
- |
-
Submit
