If Only

• Artist: StormCloud914
• Description: This is how I wish life would be, meets what life is like. Yeah. Kinda stupid, but it's how I feel. Yeah. Comment and critic please.
• Date: 02/07/2009
• Tags: only

If only life
where as beautiful
as in fairy tales.

The world would be fair,
My heart would not ache,
with emptiness.

The craving for someone to care,
would be filled
to the brim

And my life
would not be
so horribly

Grim

If only life was like
a fairy tale,
I would find my prince.

Everything would be happy.

I wouldn't need to reach for the knife,
to take away the pain.
Pills wouldn't exist;

I wouldn't crave to die.

If only life were as beautiful as in fairy tales.

Comments

[The Sweet Sadist]

Um. . . kay that was nice but um. . . i felt like that at once but i still do but don't be so down live life to the fullest so stop being depressed or you shall die that way and stay that way now is that how you want to live? Or do you want to be happy enough to look for your "prince" and make your life the fairy tale YOU deserve.

[angel_dark_blue]

I thought life in a fairy tales same as in reality.......
we have 2 always struggle to get what we want.........

[Rhuni]

the knife part is yeah your right kinda stupid. But the rest is good. Dont add horrible thoughts only the brightest thoughts of the inner world of your heart should be told forever until you get old.

Sowwi, I write my comments poem style so people read it >.<