Here

• Artist: hellobeautiful793
• Description: a poem i made up today about waiting for the one you need to show up
• Date: 02/02/2009
• Tags: patience here waiting love poem

I'm waiting here
my patience running thin
the lights are gowing dim
but i'm frozen here.


I'm waiting here
wind blowing in my face
you should know your place
yet i'm alone here

I'm waiting
I'm shaking
I'm breathing in and out

I'm wishing
I'm hoping
I have no energy to shout

I'm waiting here
can't you see?
I'm waiting here
for you and me.

Comments

[xxxemo-princess666xxx]

its ok. its not bad, not great, but it wasnt as bad as sum ive read. 4/5. good job