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He follows me.
He lurks in the shadows.
He scares me.
His name...?
Victor.
His purpose...?
To track me.
His need...?
My blood.
He follows me.
He lurks in the shadows.
He scares me...
- by Wicked Monstrosity |
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- | Submitted on 02/01/2009 |
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- Title: Victor
- Artist: Wicked Monstrosity
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If you dont like it, dont comment cuz I wont bother reading it
If you like it, leave a comment and vote fairly ^.^ - Date: 02/01/2009
- Tags: victor vampire shadow
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Wicked Monstrosity - 12/29/2009
- Riiiiiiight. Like I believe that. xD
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- -x- iMinded Addiction -x- - 12/29/2009
- its iight xD
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- Wicked Monstrosity - 07/13/2009
- ... I just read this over, and realized how many things I could do better. o.o
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- Wicked Monstrosity - 07/13/2009
- It's not supposed to be thought provoking. O.o Anywho, a little rusty. Haven't wrote a poem since 3rd grade. xD All my poems are written on impulse.
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- Sauce Control - 07/13/2009
- Huh....Not exactly original...You could probably study your meter a little more, then it would be better... Your structure is really somewhat simplistic, not thought provoking. Anyway, sorry to ramble, and I didn't mean to be harsh.
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- Lady Xelles - 04/18/2009
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It reminds me of Victor from Underworld. (a great vampire)
I would personally make it a bit longer, giving the vampire more description. other than that, I love it. - Report As Spam
- Soliborn - 04/11/2009
- another five
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