OBJECTION!

• Artist: Stalker Shin Rei
• Description: Before you say anything about rhyme, I wrote this in free verse so don't whine, it is still a poem. A tribute to one of my favorite games. I will finish it another time I did not mean to make this so long, but oh well. Part two will be epic.
• Date: 01/15/2009
• Tags: objection phoenixwright edgeworth miafey

"OBJECTION"
Said Phoenix,
"The witnesses statement is clearly faulty, Your Honor."
Quoth the Judge
"Overruled"
'I am afraid I will have to penalize you once again Mr. Wright."
"Gahhh"Said Phoenix
"Well Wright? Are you giving up so soon?
Edgeworth laughed.
"Never, this man is innocent and I will prove it with evidence!
Phoenix gloated.
Said Edgeworth, "Your Honor, this man is grasping"
"He can't have anything that will turn this trial around-"
"Oh, really?"
"M-Mia!"
"Hello again Phoenix"
said his mentor, Mia Fey.
"What do you mean I have evidence?"Said Phoenix.
"Prosecutor Edgeworth, you said Mr. Wright had no evidence to prove Ms. shinsa's innocence, correct?" Said Mia
Said Edgeworth, "That I did, yes, does Wright have evidence?
"No", Said Mia, "He has a witness"
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT!!!!!!!! Everyone in the courtroom screamed. Even Phoenix.
Order, Order. Mr. Wright, What is this woman talking about, who is this witness? said the angered Judge.
"I don't even know myself Your Honor.", Phoenix said puzzledly.
"Yes you do Phoenix, she is closer than you think.", Mia said.
"Do you mean Maya?", Phoenix asked.
"Yes, the rest is up to you Phoenix" Said Mia
"HOLD IT" Said Phoenix, but it was too late Mia was gone...


To be Continued

Comments

[Stalker Shin Rei]

I sort of meant for this to e for most Phoenix Wright fans.
Here's some background information:

Phoenix Wright: A rookie defense attorney who has awesome hair.
Mia Fey: His mentor, died after his first case.
Maya Fey: Her sister, became Phoenix's assistant after he cleared her of murder.
Miles Edgeworth: A prosecutor who has known Wright since grade school, was often called demon prosecutor for his alleged use of false evidence.

[Crystal Orchid]

I love how you're going for a different genre of poetry (free verse) in place of an overly done rhyme scheme. I recognize familiar lines from this selection, reminding of me of when I first played Ace Attorney. I'm a fan of the Phoenix Wright games as well, so that's what sparked my interest in your poem in the first place. When I did read it, though, I found it a tad confusing, but nothing more than what I couldn't pick out. It doesn't contain a lot of background information for someone who's n