Screams (4/23/04)

• Artist: Danika Miles
• Description:
• Date: 01/07/2009
• Tags: screams

Screams of lightning hit my body,
as I fall to the floor screaming in pain.
Rain drops fall from my eyes,
as the screams of hatred overwhelm me.
Nothing I can do. Nothing I can say.
Just sit there till it’s over.
Till it stops and the pain goes away.
Till the storm is over,
When the lightning stops striking,
then the rain will go away.
Away with my pain.

Comments

[Xx-Forgotten Mist-xX]

^^ very visual and it brings out the pain well

[Aaron_Fans]

So good! 5/5

[CannibalWizards]

BEAUTIFUL.
Great work.
:]

[iiLil_emo_PuppeTii]

i lvoe this poem. i love it because yu explain that like who ever this person is, there yelling and screaming and hits is a thunderstorm... and that there hits is lighting and there screaming thunder. and your tears is rain. i purely love it. its awesome how yu used metafors in here. good job. please keep up the good work!! 5/5!!!

[Oricalcon]

To me its dark, it seems to say that something sinister is there cause pain, or maybe just such a powerful memory. It tells me that some dark entity or emotion is possessing you to feel the ultimate pain, to show you the path of hopelessness, and all you can do is wait till the end comes and pray the next is quick.