unsure love

• Artist: xXx_demonic_aphrodite_xXx
• Description: this is one of my first writings so its really not all that great and im not really sure if it would be considered a poem because i dont really know how to put it in "proper form" and all but uhh...ya >.< here ya go please tell me what you think because i just wrote this because i was bored one day i dont know if im a good writer or not...probably not...but i would appreciate it if you gave me your opinion
• Date: 01/07/2009
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you look me in the eyes
but i cant see what you feel anymore
you kiss me but the butterflies i used to feel are gone
they seem to have been crushed by one question
that i hold inside
do you really love me?
i try to brush the feeling away but i cant
im confused and unsure
i want to make myself beleive that everything is fine
but is it?
or is all of this just a story that i am forced to play a part in
i need you to tell me you love me truly
and that everything will be okay
please lead me as though i was blind
and you are here to help me find my way
then i will know if you truly love me

Comments

[xXx_demonic_aphrodite_xXx]

thnx ^_^

[Akirekira]

wow, beautifull poem, I'm dumbstruck, increadably wowd, love it, 5/5