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Love is most important
There once was a girl, named Joan
She loved to dance and sing
She was never able to roam
She would be ringing the dinner bell “ding”
She would cook & clean
Make beds and mop floors
So she was always quite lean
She dreamt of going to the princes doors
But her mother would yell “stop dreaming and get cleaning”
She rarely was let out of the house
She would look out the windows while she cleaned them
But she was always quite as a mouse
She would lie on her bed next to the fire that was dim
While she dreamt of the prince would save her one day
Though she knew it was only a dream she never would’ve guessed
One day the prince came to their house and he did say
I am looking for thy who is the best
The mother and the sister all thought it may be them, but no
The prince said, “I know there is someone else here with you”
He then said,”I am asking you to show so”
The mother replied, “It is no more than us two”
He said, “May I come in”
As he walked past them to the next room
He saw a beautiful girl next to a fire that was dim
And he said, “It is thy I was looking for”
He woke her and she said, ”It’s you I have dreamt of”
“Why I have of you, also” he spoke as he headed for the door
And so they lived happily ever after and now you know what is most important, which is love
- by love_hate_magic_maj |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/05/2009 |
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- Title: Love is most important
- Artist: love_hate_magic_maj
- Description: I know it's kinda cinderella-ish, but i thought of it and my friend said is was good. It does ryhme, but everyother sentence, so i hope you like it!
- Date: 01/05/2009
- Tags: love most important
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Edward-Bella-NessieCullen - 01/05/2009
- I like it alot but like I said before... I like poems that DONT ryme. so ya. I really like it but I also think you should change it a little so it isn't as Cinderella-ish so meanie peoples dont pick on it. so ya again. Good job chocolate_princessJaMvamp
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