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I TOLD YOU I LOVED YOU BUT YOU WOULDNT CARE YOU LEFT ME THERE WITH
A BROKEN STARE AND THEN YOU JUST LEFT LIKE ASHES IN THE AIR I WANDERED AROUND THINKING THAT YOU WERE THERE.......BUT ALL THAT WAS LEFT WAS THE SCENT OF YOUR HAIR ..3 DAYS PASSED AND I WENT INSANE WANDERING ALONE IN MY EMPTY HAZE I COULDNT STOP THINKING OF WHAT WE COULD BE AND HOW YOU LEFT ME IN THE DARK TO SLEEP...
- by Xxmickeh305xx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/29/2008 |
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- Title: ROMANCE
- Artist: Xxmickeh305xx
- Description: A LOVE STORY
- Date: 12/29/2008
- Tags: romance
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Kechero-TheForsakenRose - 03/05/2009
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1. You shouldn't capitalize everything, it disctracts the reader from the meaning.
2. The colour red will do the same thing.
3. I agree, Haze would have fit better.
4. You've got talent. - Report As Spam
- Xxmickeh305xx - 01/01/2009
- THANKZ FOE DA TIP biggrin vv
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- xXxAliceSuicidexXx - 01/01/2009
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instead of days you should have put haze.
It would have sounded better. But still good. - Report As Spam
- Xxmickeh305xx - 12/30/2008
- vote!!!!! 5/5 thankz peoplerz biggrin
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