I wonder and wait

• Artist: KiMoNo18GiRl
• Description: ok i got inspired by other poems and i made my first one so ya tell me wat u think. This is a poem about love...really the title says it all. Please Comment!!!
• Date: 12/28/2008
• Tags: wonder wait love

I like you so,
not sure it's love though.

I think of you,
and the things you do,
and i wonder do you like me too?

Some friends say yes,
some friends say no,
but i guess i'll never know.

Therefor i'll wait and stay,
hopeing someday you'll say.

Comments

[Lost Music Note]

I can relate to that.

[SilverChaosti]

It's not bad for a starter poem.... though it seems a bit short.... otherwise, you can tell it's from the heart and has a lot of emotion to it...

[zeena 360]

wow thats good, so true

[onionio]

It's a good start. Better than many poems i've read, so keep working. wink

[Fiingerling]

This is truly lovely. Its quite nice for a first poem. I hope you make more.

[Galloping_Ginger]

ehh i guess its good for your first poem. keep working on this, though. and in time, add more... umm... voice. extend it a bit. you know.. just make it absolutely appealing. =] well sorry im kind of harsh lol... just my OCD kicking in xD check my poems and stuff if you want! ^_^ my favorite one is "Broken Hearts&Torn Up Letters" go ahead and check it out! =]