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The wind blew them away from my memory,
leaving only ashes of bits of the words-
placed on the paper,
as a reminder to remember-
of the thought of the words-
I have forgotten.
- by Broken_Guardian-Auron- |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/27/2008 |
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- Title: Forgotten words
- Artist: Broken_Guardian-Auron-
- Description: This poem was written really quick, it's just something I wrote while trying to remember of another poem I recited without having the words on a paper.
- Date: 12/27/2008
- Tags: forgotten words poem
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- white_angel_sweetheart - 11/12/2009
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truly good start but to be a true poet one must write about some thing that is of importance to them.
I myself am a poet, i am ot famous or i havent even made a book yet .... but i started out small like writeing about stuff like bullies and stuff that mad me happy/sad/ angrey then i went to the hardest on to write about which is love. I didnt like writeing as much when i was younger ( i am now 16) but i love it so much now. it helps me relieve my stress.
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- Nurse Garland - 12/31/2008
- usually in poetry the writer makes his point rather quickly and inplied. i got nothing from this. what did you forget?
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