Moonlit Night

• Artist: Kashi2Kashi
• Description: This may seem like a faris wheel ride, but there is a deeper meaning. IF you can find it...
• Date: 12/23/2008
• Tags: moonlit night fariswheel firstkiss

My cheecks feel heavy

My stomach lurches

So magnificant

I feel it up my spine

Holding my breath

It's so perfect

The wind turns my hair

Closing my eyes

Breathing it in......


Slowly pull away

Look around more clearly

Dark yet so bright

The people so careless

Feeling ontop of all

So vivid

So serene

Until the ride takes me down

Comments

[Danvere]

Sounded grade to me. It kind of made me feel like.. electricity. Dangerous, edgy, but kind of powerful and magnificent.

[Kashi2Kashi]

That's cool. I never saw it that way before, but it works. I was thinking more along the lines of this girl just got her first kiss and is super happy...until their relationship ends. but i'd like to hear more different ideas and perspectives too!

[Aida-la]

I'm not sure if I get but here is what I got from it. The girl is frightened yet scared at the same time. She wants to do something she has never done and she is excited about it even though she knows the consequences could be severe.

Close? Probably not.