One Winter Night

• Artist: Emma11042
• Description: Nobody knows if he's real. But he may be if you belive.
• Date: 12/21/2008
• Tags: winter night

One calm night,
When nothing can be heard,
Not even a mouse,
Not even a bird,
Through the old chimney he slides on his back,
Leaving presents for all the kids in his sack,
You'd want to stay awake to see if it were true,
But beliving is the only thing you could do,
He leaves through your chimney,
Hops onto his sleigh,
And disappears throught the sky so grey.

Comments

[Bec-Becness]

It's all good except for the last line. You should change that. Otherwise, great!