Suicide Note

• Artist: 2 much mcdonalds
• Description: I'm not trying to commit suicide, I just put myself in the shoes of a suicidal person.
  Hope you enjoy!
• Date: 12/21/2008
• Tags: suicide note

Please no criticism tonight
I know my room’s a mess
Please no criticism tonight
I know my head’s not right
And I’m not all that polite
But please no criticism tonight
I may not be that bright
Since my grades are quite a sight
But please no criticism tonight
My life may be a wreck
My friends have jumped off deck
Please no criticism tonight
I may not be the girl of your dreams
Or as sweet as I may seem
But please no criticism tonight
Tonight I want peace
Tonight I want quiet
I want happiness and rest
Tonight may be my first
Tonight may be my last
A chance I will take
It might be my first, it may be my last
But please,
No criticism tonight.

Comments

[violet kushina]

nice note..

[2 much mcdonalds]

its okay,
thanks for noticing.

[michellie-87]

this is cool!
I didn't realize it was a suicide note untill I looked at the title after reading it.
I know it's ironic, because it says no criticism, but it should be "quite a sight". 5/5 because I like it smile

[matthias_uber]

im not a big fan of how many times you said no critisism tonight but liked the rest 4/5