Why does this have to end?

• Artist: lifes-a-mystery
• Description: this is about my ex bf in real life...this is pretty much what happened.i know its not good. thats because i made it as i was typing it ill try to improve it over time and post the new one. tell me wat u think
• Date: 12/16/2008
• Tags: does have

Why does this have to end?
you said we would last forever
you gave up and now your done
why did you lie to me?
you said that you would love me forever
now your done with me
you said we would be together forever
and now im left with a broken heart
why does this have to end?
why don't you love me?

you said you would love me till the end of time
but you lied
why does this have to end?
you said we would last forever
you gave up and now your done
you lied to me
and now im through

you come up with excuses
i know there not true
you said you'd love me forever
and now your through with me
why did you lie to me?

you said we would last forever
you gave up and now your done
why did you lie to me?
you said that you would love me forever
now your done with me
you said we would be together forever
and now im left with a broken heart
why does this have to end?
why don't you love me?

its about time i forget about you...

Comments

[lifes-a-mystery]

thanks...but this isnt the one i was talking about -_-

[twiinblader]

Nice job cous. I recommend, when your editing, to have a certain amount of syllables in each line to give it some rythm. But all together 5/5 razz

[O_annayasha_chan_O]

i kno how u feel....haha it is good. some ppl might complain cuz it doesnt rhyme but thats not what the point of this is about...its rlly touching, good job 5/5