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The flowers of Spring are in full bloom
Always there for me
Blooming in front of my eyes
It's such a sight to see
In a meadow
With a breeze
The flowers sway
so gently
I'll never forget that
It's my home
- by September feild |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/15/2008 |
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- Title: dunno...
- Artist: September feild
- Description: Made it up,please comment,and tell me if it sounds more like a poem or a song.(Weird huh?)
- Date: 12/15/2008
- Tags: song
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Septembers sun - 04/10/2009
- nice ^_^
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- Jay2997 - 04/06/2009
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wow
i think thats the shortest poem/song youve ever wrote
usally there pretty long - Report As Spam
- September feild - 12/22/2008
- k XP
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- UNKNOW dude ii - 12/18/2008
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I'd say its more of a poem, it's not long enuff 2 be a song and it lacks a chorus
so yeah it's gud 4 a poem though =)
although if u wanna make it into a song I suggest u write more about ur home
maybe add a chorus that talks about ur home =) - Report As Spam
- September feild - 12/16/2008
- Please comment.=)
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