The Concrete Floor

• Artist: The_Raven_Haven
• Description:
• Date: 12/13/2008
• Tags: concrete floor

If i killed myself today,
jumped off a building and went away.
How would you remember me?
would you remember my lifeless body on the concrete floor?
Broken and frail, nothing more.
Or would you remember me for who i was and turned out to be,
beond the drama and uncirtanty?
As i lie there, what goes through your head?
how would your life be if i were dead?
Would you cry and weep and mourn in fear?
Or would you not shead a single tear
for the lifeless courps lying broken,helpless and still on the concrete floor?
lying there and nothing more.

Comments

[Sikki-MCRmy-]

i like the poem.
just one thing, tho.
you spelled uncertanty wrong. {just sayin}
but still. 5/5

[SmileCute12]

you little mastermind you
you are so good
5/5

[Wolfina Sarnata]

I wonder the same...
Would people actually remember me?
Your poem is a masterpiece.