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You've shown me hope,
You've shown me desire,
gave me a way to cope,
setting my soul on fire.
I'm so appreciative, it's true,
of everything you've helped me through.
No longer in the black, only the blue.
My words I write, it's all for you.
My guardian angel, but not real,
by my side I hope you stay.
I can't deny how I feel,
and strength, for this I pray.
One day I hope with what I confide,
You learn I want to be the one by your side.
- by LadyKrystine |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Angel
- Artist: LadyKrystine
- Description: A little thing written for a dear friend of mine while in math class. I tried to show my emotion through it and keep with a rhyme. Please be honest and fair with your votes and comments.
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: angel love emotion
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 12/12/2008
- Ah, longing for that, 'tis something I am familiar with. "No longer the black, only the blue" seems a bit forced and clunky. Not bad, it definitely could use some work, and perhaps a better word choice, but it is not bad. I also feel the last line is a little weak. 2.5/5.
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