Her or Me?

• Artist: iCandii-Chan
• Description: She is in love with a guy that only sees another.
• Date: 12/11/2008
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I see you,
You see me.
Or do you see,
someone else in your eyes?
What do you see?
Do you see me?
I am alone and scared,
You are exicted and cheerful,
Is it because she's better than me?
Why do you hate me so?
I forgive you,
I miss you,
What would you do,
If I said 'I like you'?
I see you,
You see her,
I want you to see me.
Do you love me?
I will tell you,
I Love You. heart

Comments

[iCandii-Chan]

This wasn't one of my good ones. -_- I didn't like it much.

[R A I N I I D I]

manon take it easy jeeesh. it may not be the best but it is good. ;3 nicely done cherri xO 5/5

[Belle-Manon]

It's not very creative, I'll tell you that much. If you're going to write about unrequited love, you're going to have to outshine every other poem about that, and that's a lot.

[x_V-Ghost-V_x]

...people tend to play on that weakness, and people tend to do cruel things with the knowledge of that weakness...