Holding a light

• Artist: Gotsugo
• Description: This is a original poem, this is not from any other website. This is a rewrite from the original one i wrote about a year ago in my journal. I got motivated to write this by a time i kept getting turned down by this girl i was obsessed with and it was back when i was immature emotionally stubborn and obsessive i would write these to get her attention but times have passed and i have another girl friend.
• Date: 12/10/2008
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I sit here cold
from a absence if light beside me,
here to hold me
keep me warm and smother me
sadness is creeping deep into my heart
and i still try to break through
trying to find the light
it stands away from me
and it leaves me here with only one thing to do
is to cry here
waiting for someone to listen to my woe
temps always fail
and for some reason i keep on trying
the same old thing
and the same old thing always happens,
i can never face the answer i dont want to hear
and i look through eyes that show me lies
slowly shrouding a cloud around me
and i try to accept that
because i fear the future
and all i want
is one thing to bring me salvation,
im always going to be trying to have a happy ending
i see it in my dreams
and in my heart
a light the doesn't seem to be there,
so i walk towards it with hope and deep thoughts
that simply put me to tears
just waiting for sympathy from others
for my strong greed for attention.

Comments

[Aura-Dot Hack]

surprised o
I didn't know you entered writen work Shaun ^^
5/5 It's good :3

[cookie loving monkey butt]

kinda emoish but good smile ur a good poet if u made it

[New Jersey Pie]

5/5
I like it,
good job Ziffy. ;D