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• Artist: neon toxic panda
• Description: just a poem i wrote and gave to a guy hehe
  shake wood annie was a dance by the way ^.^
• Date: 12/10/2008
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That day in grade four
As you walked through the door
I knew i was cursed
As i felt my heart burst
Love is the first thing that comes to my mind
When i'm thinking of you and your behind
The feelings I have are more than just friends
But i know friendship mends
The day of the shake wood annie when you said yes
We didnt dance together which made a big mess
So rosses are red and violets are blue
Your but is cute and so are you.

Comments

[Damien7017]

I like it(^-^) I think its adorable. It's short... but adorable!

[Zaraxivus66]

Hmm...I mean no offense when i say such but, this conveys a slight of childishness. It does not show as much potential as some but its a start. I suggest that it to be enhanced for a more serious purpose other than a contest and for laughs.

[AngeI Flonne]

Great job as I told you before ;3