J'suis LÃ

• Artist: bumbles bounce
• Description: Just something that I wrote, any comments or suggestions would be awesome, for how am I to get better without your OPs?
  Thanks.
• Date: 12/07/2008
• Tags: jsuis

These bright lights,
All I ever remember,
Makin' paths,
In my head,
Doin things,
Never the same,

Every day,
A grand old game,
Wakin me up to play,
Special way,
To say,
I'll always be there for you,
If you're down,
I'll be 'round,
Workin' to make you smile,
Don't want no lies,
Wanna see the truth,
In your eyes,
Don't have to worry,
About no pain,
'Cause I'll be there to take it all away,
If you're down,
I'll be 'round.
Workin to make you smile.

Comments

[bumbles bounce]

I actually haven't heard of that book, but thank you.

[jojs_97]

i love the ending the most because it reminds me of a book called vampire knight. have you heard of them? anyways... good poem!!